Objective

Review -- What is a Plot W?

Short Story as Model

Wrap Up

What is a Plot W?: Lessons from "Everybody Knows Tobie"

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Objective

SWBAT explain the PLOT W by examining a text featuring this plot device, "Everybody Knows Tobie."

Big Idea

Students enjoy writing with the element of surprise when they use a Plot W narrative structure.

Lesson Author

Tim Pappageorge

Park Ridge, IL

Grade Level

Ninth grade

Subjects

English / Language Arts

Texas

character action

characterization (ELL Writing)

dialogue (ELL Writing)

dialect (Literary Terms)

dialogue (Writing)

Writing

Writing Process

Standards

RL.9-10.2

Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details; provide an objective summary of the text.

RL.9-10.3

Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting motivations) develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters, and advance the plot or develop the theme.

RL.9-10.4

Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language evokes a sense of time and place; how it sets a formal or informal tone).

RL.9-10.5

Analyze how an author's choices concerning how to structure a text, order events within it (e.g., parallel plots), and manipulate time (e.g., pacing, flashbacks) create such effects as mystery, tension, or surprise.

W.9-10.3c

Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to create a coherent whole.

W.9-10.10

Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and audiences.

Review -- What is a Plot W?

15 minutes

Plot W.

The following image (link) comes to us from a blog about dramatic structure (link to blog). In this image, we can see that an alternative to a standard plot line (exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution) can be in a Plot W, which calls for two reversals along the way. Students find this technique to be an intriguing way of structuring their events (W.9-10.3c) because they like to have a trick of their sleeves, so to speak, and to imagine pulling the reader along. In addition, I have noticed over the years, that this lesson gets students to become better readers of fiction, as they end up reading more carefully for the structure of a text, especially noting how author use flashback or order time in a way that a makes the story more interesting (RL.9-10.5). Yes, the students have long been able to identify a flashback, for example, but I see this lesson as helping students to get inside the writer's head a bit better, on the production end, to consider how he or she made the choices of where and how to sequence the scenes.

I will ask:

- How can you incorporate reversals in your story?

- When we read the story "Everybody Knows Tobie," listen carefully for times when the narrator's views of himself or his situation seem to be improving (going up in the plot W) or degrading (going down in the plot W).

Short Story as Model

40 minutes

Students read "Eveybody Knows Tobie" in pairs, noting the various parts of the story on the Plot W. Here is a brief crib note on the plot:

1.) The narrator wants a job and to be accepted. (down--initial setback)

2.) Tobie explains to him how we can do this, just say that he's Tobie's brother. (up--thing are getting better)

3.) The "gringos" in town almost reject the narrator. (down--a deeper setback)

4.) They accept him because he's Tobie's brother. (up--a seeming triumph).

The story deals with the insidious nature of a town ruled by de facto racism (RL.9-10.2). Both the narrator and Tobie, his brother, want to be accepted by the white townsmen in town for both personal reasons and for reasons (RL.9-10.3)of business (paper route). This is all typified by the question of whether nor not they should be allowed to get their hair cut at Mr. Brewer's barbershop. In the end, the narrator is allowed to do this, but really, it's a hollow victory (RL.9-10.5) and a somewhat ironic connection to the plot W (ends on a high note, but it's ironically sort of bad, anyway).

Today, the students will read the story, and tomorrow, we will discuss its relation to the Plot W as well as the manner in which the writer uses dialogue to move the story forward.

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Publication Information (link to a textbook that has this short story)

Wrap Up

5 minutes

Student uptake on the story

I ask students to complete the following exit slip individually:

- How do you feel about the ending? Is it a victory or not?

- How does the writer use the Plot W to create a powerful story?

**For homework, the students can begin drafting their larger narratives. They are ready to begin to graph out what their characters will do now that they have been fleshed out and now that we have discussed plot in class!

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