The Writer's Memo for the Life Proposal Essay

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Objective

SWBAT reflect on their writing process and improvement by completing a writer's memo.

Big Idea

How have you grown? Using a writer's memo to reflect on the essay journey.

Do Now: Gather Materials

5 minutes

As preparation for our polishing, writer's memo and essay submission, I ask students to compile all their essay materials into one packet. They need:

1. Threaded Revision Rough Draft
2. Partner Response Rough Draft
3. Research Notes

Compiling all needed elements now saves time when we begin our reflection, and requesting a specific order of elements makes it easy for me to follow their progression when I assess the essays.

For students who are missing elements, I ask for a note. They must list missing elements and the date they will bring the elements to me, thus encouraging student accountability.

Polishing and Writer's Memo

40 minutes

First, I ask students to polish their essays, making any logical changes recommended during our peer revision. They should then print their final copy and place it on top of their rough drafts.

Next, I ask students to complete a writer's memo, reminding them that the writer's memo is a dialogue between us (teacher and students). This is their chance to tell me how they feel about their essay. What was easy? What wasn't? What still needs work? This is also a chance to reflect on how well they completed the writing process. Was the outline helpful? Did they take revision seriously? If not, why? Was it the quality of the feedback? This is stapled to the top of all drafts and notes.

I gather information that will help me improve the writing process for my whole class through this activity, but more importantly, I know what type of feedback my students most want.

Submission

10 minutes

I take the last 10 minutes to call students up alphabetically to submit their essays. While this takes class time, it holds students accountable. They must either submit their essay or give me the exact date they will submit it with a reason why it is late. I enter this information immediately into our online grading system, so both parents and I can see the student's status.

The good news is that most essays are on time and interesting: