Annotation Logs: Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf

 
 
 
Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
Student Work Sample
 
 
This is a student example of an Annotation Log completed for "Native Son." It is the spreadsheet generated by the Google Form where they enter the information to construct a complete annotation.
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
Student Work Sample
 
 
This is a student example of an Annotation Log completed for "Native Son." It is the spreadsheet generated by the Google Form where they enter the information to construct a complete annotation.
 
Independent Student Learning

Annotation Logs

Annotation Logs in my class can be on paper or online, usually depending on what modality the student prefers, as well as what their access is to technology at home. Annotation Logs are a routine through which my students explore the unit text by analyzing quotes, asking questions, and making clarifications. Whether online or on paper, it is my routine to respond to their annotations. Because each student writes so many annotations throughout a unit, I have many opportunities to dip into their thinking at multiple points along the way. Annotation Logs are fundamental building blocks to some of my other classroom practices including Socratic Seminars, TIED analysis paragraphs, and essay writing. For each annotation in the log, my students must include their focus for the annotation, the quote itself, the page or line number, and the analysis. The focus of the annotation could be a literary device, a theme connection or an approach through one of the literary theory lenses we have studied. Citing the quote and where it is found makes for easy reference later on. The analysis is 3-4 sentences that shows how the quote addresses the initial focus they indicated. It is in this last part that I address any feedback by asking questions and clarifying any plot confusion.

Strategy Resources (2)
Strategy Explanation
 
 
This is a screencast I created to explain Annotation Logs to my students.
 
Student Work Sample
 
 
This is a student example of an Annotation Log completed for "Native Son." It is the spreadsheet generated by the Google Form where they enter the information to construct a complete annotation.
 
Strategy Explanation
 
 
This is a screencast I created to explain Annotation Logs to my students.
Student Work Sample
 
 
This is a student example of an Annotation Log completed for "Native Son." It is the spreadsheet generated by the Google Form where they enter the information to construct a complete annotation.
Johanna Paraiso
Fremont High School Oakland
Oakland, CA


 

About this strategy

Prep Time:
Long
Subject:
English / Language Arts
Grade:
Twelfth grade
Similar Strategies
Feedback Systems
Video Diagnostic

My students have a high-stakes oral defense of their senior research towards the end of the spring semester, and we prepare for that all year. The Video Diagnostic is a recording of each student’s starting point in the oral presentation process and an opportunity for students to see a snippet of their presentation "selves," what their peers see as their current strengths, and what their teacher sees as their current challenges. Each Video Diagnostic includes these three parts -- the oral presentation, peer feedback, and teacher feedback. These are then packaged into one short Video Diagnostic, uploaded, and shared to the student. The student watches it all and gets a clearer sense of how they appear to an audience in terms of their tone, inflection, pacing, and eye contact. I also have them watch these diagnostics a few weeks before the high-stakes presentation as a confidence booster because all of them will have made tremendous gains in their oral presentation skills from that first diagnostic to months later when they are finalizing their presentations at the end of the year.

 
Collaborative Student Groups
Film Framing

Film Framing uses animated films students often remember from childhood as a jumping-off point for approaching the serious and often emotionally tough conversations that we will be having later in the class period about the novel we are studying. Given their visual appeal and simple storylines, these films are one way to support my students as they grapple with complex questions and apply literary theories and devices. Part of the analysis process for my students is tracking their observations throughout each clip and using those notes during the class discussion that follows the viewing. The understanding they gain through the film discussion on how to answer these complex questions and apply multiple lenses is then applied to our class novel. An additional benefit of Film Framing is that my students become more critical consumers of media in general.

 
Feedback Systems

One thing students can always count on in our Socratic seminars is that they will be recorded. Preparing for the Socratic Seminar involves watching film footage of the previous seminar discussion. Students can participate more effectively if we acknowledge what they are doing right, and they buy in more deeply to the idea of using evidence to back their claims when I do the same during this preparation process. In this case, I use evidence in the form of recorded footage to demonstrate their success with some key aspects of a quality academic discussion.For this strategy, the purpose is twofold. First, though I do not re-play each and every single video, I do feel that there is value in capturing student talk that can be made available for those students who can benefit from listening to their peers. This is why I upload and share the videos to all of the students. I have often used recordings of classroom discussion to inform how I will revise the same unit for the following year.The second purpose of this strategy is so that I can script verbatim the exchanges between the students that happen in the seminar. I then provide the students this script, and they can see what we call their “isms”. For example, a student might notice that they say the word “like” or “ya know what I’m sayin’” repeatedly in the seminar. These “isms” affect how people listening to them might respond, and by capturing them on paper, it gives the students evidence of what they will want to work on in terms of the way they orally present themselves. The scripts are also a useful resource for when students are constructing analysis through writing because they or their peers might have cited a strong quote or made a critical connection on which students can build their own analysis.

 
 
Something went wrong. See details for more info
Nothing to upload
details
close