Reflection: Essay Writing Wrapping up the Explanatory Essay: Writing the conclusion and reviewing each other's essays - Section 3: Application: Peer Review

 

While I think giving them specific ways to provide feedback was a good idea, I still want them to work on being more specific in the feedback. Check out a video Peer response from one student that was a bit more vague, and another student who added a few more details. In the videos, the students were not as descriptive about the kinds of improvements needed and the strengths in the essay, but we're getting there. More work to do!

  More details needed in the peer review
  Essay Writing: More details needed in the peer review
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Wrapping up the Explanatory Essay: Writing the conclusion and reviewing each other's essays

Unit 4: The Search for Identity: Essay Writing
Lesson 3 of 4

Objective: SWBAT organize and draft the conclusion of the explanatory essay by using a suggested outline. SWBAT revise their essays by engaging in a peer review process.

Big Idea: Students put a bow on their essays, wrapping it up with a solid conclusion.

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