Reflection: Developing a Conceptual Understanding Now Add the Descriptions and Definitions - Section 3: Partner Work

 

I am trying to make the students understand that they create a sentence and then describe or define something in the sentence. I call the sentence they create the "detail sentence", and our paragraphs have three details. After each, "detail sentence" is a sentence that I call the "describing or defining sentence," because that is how is connects to the "detail sentence."

The problem is that they don't always make the preceding sentence about a detail. This is evident in the video. I believe more practice, explicit instruction, and some small group conferencing will fix this confusion. When we conference I discuss how the sentence after the "detail sentence" needs to describe or define it. So, there needs to be a connection between the sentences. They should relate to each other. One question I ask my students is: Is there a word in the sentence you can define? I find this to be the big issue in primary grade writing. The students are great at writing details, but connecting sentences to the "detail sentences" is quite a challenge.

  Developing a Conceptual Understanding: Student Work
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Now Add the Descriptions and Definitions

Unit 11: Writing Based On Research
Lesson 7 of 10

Objective: SWBAT add descriptions and definitions to their writing based on research.

Big Idea: Add some complexity to writing about a research topic by including descriptions and definitions.

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