Annotation Logs: Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf

 
 
 
Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
Student Work Sample
 
 
This is a student example of an Annotation Log completed for "Native Son." It is the spreadsheet generated by the Google Form where they enter the information to construct a complete annotation.
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
  • Annotation Log Native Son LOATA (Responses) - Form Responses 1.pdf
Student Work Sample
 
 
This is a student example of an Annotation Log completed for "Native Son." It is the spreadsheet generated by the Google Form where they enter the information to construct a complete annotation.
 
Independent Student Learning

Annotation Logs

Annotation Logs in my class can be on paper or online, usually depending on what modality the student prefers, as well as what their access is to technology at home. Annotation Logs are a routine through which my students explore the unit text by analyzing quotes, asking questions, and making clarifications. Whether online or on paper, it is my routine to respond to their annotations. Because each student writes so many annotations throughout a unit, I have many opportunities to dip into their thinking at multiple points along the way. Annotation Logs are fundamental building blocks to some of my other classroom practices including Socratic Seminars, TIED analysis paragraphs, and essay writing. For each annotation in the log, my students must include their focus for the annotation, the quote itself, the page or line number, and the analysis. The focus of the annotation could be a literary device, a theme connection or an approach through one of the literary theory lenses we have studied. Citing the quote and where it is found makes for easy reference later on. The analysis is 3-4 sentences that shows how the quote addresses the initial focus they indicated. It is in this last part that I address any feedback by asking questions and clarifying any plot confusion.

Strategy Resources (2)
Strategy Explanation
 
 
This is a screencast I created to explain Annotation Logs to my students.
 
Student Work Sample
 
 
This is a student example of an Annotation Log completed for "Native Son." It is the spreadsheet generated by the Google Form where they enter the information to construct a complete annotation.
 
Strategy Explanation
 
 
This is a screencast I created to explain Annotation Logs to my students.
Student Work Sample
 
 
This is a student example of an Annotation Log completed for "Native Son." It is the spreadsheet generated by the Google Form where they enter the information to construct a complete annotation.
Johanna Paraiso
Fremont High School Oakland
Oakland, CA


 

About this strategy

Prep Time:
Long
Subject:
English / Language Arts
Grade:
Twelfth grade
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Feedback Systems

One thing students can always count on in our Socratic seminars is that they will be recorded. Preparing for the Socratic Seminar involves watching film footage of the previous seminar discussion. Students can participate more effectively if we acknowledge what they are doing right, and they buy in more deeply to the idea of using evidence to back their claims when I do the same during this preparation process. In this case, I use evidence in the form of recorded footage to demonstrate their success with some key aspects of a quality academic discussion.For this strategy, the purpose is twofold. First, though I do not re-play each and every single video, I do feel that there is value in capturing student talk that can be made available for those students who can benefit from listening to their peers. This is why I upload and share the videos to all of the students. I have often used recordings of classroom discussion to inform how I will revise the same unit for the following year.The second purpose of this strategy is so that I can script verbatim the exchanges between the students that happen in the seminar. I then provide the students this script, and they can see what we call their “isms”. For example, a student might notice that they say the word “like” or “ya know what I’m sayin’” repeatedly in the seminar. These “isms” affect how people listening to them might respond, and by capturing them on paper, it gives the students evidence of what they will want to work on in terms of the way they orally present themselves. The scripts are also a useful resource for when students are constructing analysis through writing because they or their peers might have cited a strong quote or made a critical connection on which students can build their own analysis.

 
Instructional Openings
Conversational Warm-Up

Generating student talk in the classroom is a focal point for my teaching, and it is important that those conversations happen in both high-stakes and low-stakes settings. A Warm-Up is the forum for a low-stakes conversation that can generate a high return. For example, the journey for a student to become an excellent oral presenter can be an uncomfortable one. Opening class with a conversation where students can talk with each other in anticipation of these growing pains does perpetuate a sense of camaraderie and support, although my students have referred to it as a feeling of "shared doom". Additionally, a teacher can have an influence on the energy of the class depending on what prompts are crafted for the Conversational Warm-Up.


 
Feedback Systems
Video Self-Assessment

A valuable routine not only for my students but for my own learning as well is the use of video recording in the classroom. Key events to record are our academic discussions, their individual oral presentations, and as much as possible, their learning process as they build their skills. My students have a Senior Capstone Project and are expected to be able to present their research findings in both live and digital form. This is one example of a project where video recording becomes a necessary tool. From day one of the school year, the video camera slowly becomes a part of the village that is my classroom. Before students are recorded themselves, I show a significant amount of footage from previous years, whether it be past seniors giving advice about student mindset or a snapshot of a Socratic seminar. Students learn quickly that the video camera can be an amazing tool for helping them to become excellent presenters, and we discuss its value in capturing individual "isms" where a student has a particular presentation habit that needs adjusting. I also find it useful to record students giving each other peer feedback in addition to my own feedback. There is an added level of accountability when students know their feedback will also be recorded, which then leads students to focus on the language of the rubric to understand what is truly being assessed. 


 
 
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